One Bottle of Ice Wine - Ice Fantasy fanfiction - Chapter 3





The members of the Kingdom Guard were welcome always with mixed feelings in the Palace. The Ice Clan could thank peaceful days and nights to them, and many had to admit that with a tinge of bitterness. Some of them hated the idea, that common mortals guarded their dreams. While actually not anybody could join the Guard. Applicants arrived from every corner of the Mortal Kingdom, tall, wide-shouldered, proud men, but only a few of them managed to pass the obstacles raised by the General. The test of strength was simple, this was not the point, where most of them failed. However, without sense, cunning and a noble heart the rest of them waved goodbye soon as well to the camp, that stood at the Grey Crab River.  Liang Dao held a parade among the applicants with a special joy before every Sorting, noting to himself those in advance, who will make true Guards.

He was never wrong. Just like two summers ago, when he met the young man walking next to him for the first time. A blacksmith lived in the village of Xiang Mu near to the camp, who supplied the Guard with swords, arrows and harnesses, and of course with anything else, which could be made of fire and steel. One day Kai Chuo Yan arrived at the camp not with weapons, but with his son, who took into his head to join the Guard. The General said nothing. Everybody had this right, he could not even comment the applications. Not if he planned to. Xi Wang was tall, wide-shouldered and proud. But there was some cocky honour smiling in his eyes, and the General was never disappointed in him later. The boy saved one fool with one hand, who did everything to fall into the abyss during the sheep chase, then he belaboured him, when they fought together in the sword duel, and he bandaged him at the end before waving him goodbye.

Xi Wang was the leader of the sheep chase next year, already as the General’s Captain. His father could be proud of him, just like Liang Dao. That’s why he brought the boy to the Palace, when he was sent for. The General wasn’t worried about him. If anybody asked, he might tell, that the girls and ladies of the Palace should be rather careful, when seeing the Captain. But nobody asked, so he simply enjoyed watching Xi Wang turning the head of all the Palace maidens, who saw him walking around in the City this afternoon.

Xi Wang however had a great time alone as well. He already saw the City a long time ago, but not the Palace itself. His father took him to show the immortals of the Ice Clan. Xi Wang had only a few memories of that day being so cold. His father didn’t understand his son hovering about more often by the fire of the forge. It all turned out fine at the end. Chuo Yan allowed him not only to get warmed, but he entrusted him the water, then the fire, the he taught him everything he knew about weapons. But Xi Wang never intended to become a blacksmith. As soon as he forged himself his own sword, he never went close to the forge any more. His father fumed, but the boy didn’t change his mind. He stated, either the Guard or the highway. Thus Xi Wang became a Captain, and his father found another hand.

The boy straightened in the saddle, when he rode across the Endless Bridge with the General, and he kept his eyes open. While Liang Dao met the Counsellor, he stayed by the Stables, and attended the horses.

The Stables were never visited by so many clan members, like on this afternoon. Especially not so many Palace maidens. Xi Wand was scrubbing the horses with a handful of hay, and he was giggling. Behind his back the afternoon sun was shining back from the snow-silver jewels, bracelets and hairpieces. Hidden laughter and whispering was heard, when he tucked up the sleeves of his shirt to lift up the food bucket. When he was finished, he picked up his weapons, that he put aside not to bother him before He started towards the exit in such a quick pace, that the girls stalling at the stable door had to jump, turn away quickly and pretend they were there on a completely different purpose. One of them actually failed in this task. She tangled in her skirt, and fell on the ground, bringing down her friend with her too. Their pale skin turned rose, but they maybe didn’t feel ashamed at all, as Xi Wang left them there after one dropped half smile, never looking back.

The Captain promised the General to find him as soon as he’s finished. However, nobody forbid him to take the longer way. He roamed half the Palace before starting towards the Throne Room. He saw numbers of wonders and beauty, and wearing the Guard uniform he was never backstopped. Suddenly he paused. He was quite sure he knows where he is, but as he turned around the corner he realized he must have been lost. He found himself on a simple and boring corridor, while he was convinced he was headed toward the Throne Room before. He started to go backwards, only to lose direction even more. He began to curse in a low voice, but he didn’t stop. He was relieved when he finally heard steps.

He stared at his luck with eyes wide open, looking at a dark haired servant, who was carrying a pile of tablecloths in a rush. They both recoiled. She stared at him wondering, and what was even more strange, checking his weapons with the same interest. Xi Wang cleared his throat, and nodded lightly. The girl tried to avoid him, but he only straightened up and blocked her way.

- Excuse me, I’m in a hurry.

- Where to exactly? - the Captain asked attaching a small smile.

- None of your business.

- I’ll take you.

The girl looked up to him with her lips set, but said nothing. He pulled away and let her go. She moved on with a hurry, but didn’t protest, when Xi Wang followed her. He was staring at the determined steps, the swishing skirt and the dark hairlocks. He didn’t realize where they went, he came to himself only when he saw the first guards.

- It was my pleasure. - he told the girl, who didn’t even look at him.

He pulled his shoulder, and stepped on the was towards the Throne Room. Nevertheless, if he did turn and was patient, he just could have seen Bai He stopping and glancing at him from the corner of her eyes.

The General waited for him at the right side of the Throne room.

- The horses are fine? - he asked the boy.

- Yes, General.

- Have you seen anything interesting in the Palace?

- Yes, General. The guard is well-organised. They are in a good number everywhere. The Guard wouldn’t be needed after all.

- That day will never come, Captain.

- Yes, General.

Liang Dao nodded, then asked one more question:

- Was he pretty?

The Captain replied with a wide grin only.



Liu Shu lent back at his desk, and glanced out to the corridor. The scent of rising excitement was in the air, spreading around in the Palace like the scent of freshly blooming cherry flowers. He was called on by many, asking him about the prince. He gave them the only reply the had to know: His Majesty returned to the Clan. They need to know nothing else. To tell the truth he didn’t know what the prince was planning. Obviously he didn’t hurry to sit on that throne ny any means, while he was honestly interested in the doings of the Clan. The Counsellor reached for his crystal dagger and stood up. It was high time he visited Mirage Hall.



Ying Kong Shi didn’t sleep, he only rested with his eyes shut, letting his thoughts fly around freely. He was suddenly startled by the feeling of being pushed by his side. He opened his eyes with a surprise, while the blue flames were awakening in his palm. Then he realized he was alone, so he closed his fingers with a deep sigh and stood up. As the voice of the guard sounded from outside, introducing the Counsellor, his hand moved and the doors opened up.

- Greetings, Your Highness. I sincerely hope you are feeling good.

- Counsellor… - Shi waved towards the table, and they both sat. The prince were observing the other, but he didn’t feel anything awkward. Still, he was quite sure the moment of surprise has something to do with the Counsellor. One more thing to deal with later.

The Counsellor waited a while, but as the prince remained silent, he began to speak:

- Your Highness, let me give some suggestions regarding the upcoming ceremony tomorrow. As I have mentioned yesterday, we have invited may guests, and the clan chiefs wish to speak with Your Highness as well. It would be advisable to save some time for this task also after dinner.

- This is just as I wish, Liu Shu. About dinner…

Shi went silent, looking the other expectantly.

- Your Highness, I dared to entrust the High Maid with this task. The servants of the Palace are under her command, and she has great experiences in organising such events. Everything will be all right.

- The High Maid then… Tell me, Liu Shu, who is this woman? All the servants in the Palace work for her. Those who have all access to the halls of the Palace, those who take care of the food… I want to know for sure, if you are satisfied with her.

The Counsellor didn’t reply. But the look in the prince’s eyes made no doubt he would have to tell everything.

- I do not trust her fully, Your Highness. As I don’t trust many clan members either. But I keep an eye on her, and she knows that.

- Since when are these mortal servants in the Palace?

- As long as I can remember. - the Counsellor pulled his shoulders. - I don’t know, exactly when the first mortal joined as a servant, but it might be related to someone in the Guard. If Your Highness wishes, I shall look up the records.

- Leave it, no need to. I just wondered, what’s the reason…

Liu Shu glanced at the prince.

- Your Highness, there are only a few mortal servants in the Palace, and no man among them.

- Maybe the members of the Ice Clan are not in the mood to serve the Palace any more?

The Counsellor leaned back and sighed.

- The tranquillity of peace made us all a bit comfortable. There is no fool in the Kingdoms, who would cry for war. The Guard is proud and strong, but I thank the gods, that we have nobody over the Ice Veil to be worried about. If we were only on our own…

- We are weak then, you say… And we even need mortals to bring us fresh flowers…

Liu Shu watched the prince with searching eyes.

- If Your Highness doesn’t approve, I will not let any mortal servants to Mirage Hall in the future.

- It’s not the point. - Shi shook his head. - But I do not approve anybody of the Ice Clan to consider the mortals as a lesser being.

- Of course I understand, Your Highness. And I agree. However, as I mentioned, there are only a few mortal servants living in the Palace. And they all consider it to be their home.

Shi opened his mouth to speak but he changed his mind, and he only said:

- Just make sure they are handled fairly. This applies especially to he High Maid.

- Yes, Your Highness. I’m sure the High Maid would use serious methods only in justified cases.

- We’ll see. - the prince nodded. - All the mortal servants shall be present tomorrow.

- Yes, Your Highness.

- Leave now. And send the General.

Liu Shu stood up and bowed.

- At once, Your Highness.



Liang Dao and Xi Wang obeyed immediately the word of the Counsellor, and soon they called in Mirage Hall. The General made a few steps ahead, then knelt without hesitation. Xi Wang however looked at the Prince straight in the eye, who seemed to be not a summer older than him. Ying Kong Shi returned the challenging look, but by the time his eyebrows started to frown Xi Wang was already kneeling with his head bowed, his hand on his heart next to the General.

- May the Ice Clan eternally glow, Let there be forever ice and snow. - The General greeted the prince with the traditional motto of the clan, to show him his respect.

Ying Kong Shi looked at him wondering. The last time he heard these words was when his coronation was at hand, and the clan members swore allegiance to him. Memories of millennia… He had to remind himself to forget about the past, and concentrate on the present.

- Strength and honour. - Shi returned the tribute with the code of the Guard, and noted with a half smile, that the young Captain jerked his head up.

The General had a stronger self-control. He looked up only when the prince said:

- Raise up.

- My name is Liang Dao, Your Highness. This young man is Xi Wang, Captain of the Guard. We are both at your service.

Shi checked their faces, he didn’t reply at once. The General’s look was clear, and the water of the Iceflower Lake down there in the valley, and it was shining like the blade of a sword. On the other hand, Xi Wang was looking back at the prince with such a challenge, that he tended to accept it at least for having fun. But Liang Dao cleared his throat and the Captain lowered his eyes obediently.

The boy knows his place. But he is strong, it would be irresponsible to underestimate him, the prince thought.

- General, I count on the loyalty of the Guard. And I wish to visit the cap in the nearest future.

- As you wish, Your Highness. We are at your service.

Shi smiled.

- We will meet at the ceremony tomorrow. And... Captain… bring a second sword too.



When the General and the young Captain were gone, the price also left Mirage Hall through another corridor. He was headed to the Peak, where he and his brother watched the Light of Gods so many times. But that was a very long time ago, unspeakably many sunsets ago. Now, when the sun has set, but the starts were still to come out, and the world was flooded by the cherryflower-coloured shine, Shi made up his mind to look around at last from up high as well. He walked out to the head of the ice bird shaped of ice, and looked down into the abyss. He never was afraid there, not even being a child, when he had no magic in him, and he could’ve died easily. Ka Suo was always sitting beside him, and he would’ve caught him anyway. But his brother was not here now, and Shi embraced the familiar, burning pain with an obligate smile. It comforted him only to know, that Ka Suo is alive and happy, as he found not only love but freedom also. However, time and space separated them forever, and he could do nothing about that. He was about to fly before, yet it seemed he lost his taste now.

- A king cannot be soft-hearted… - the wind whispered.

Shi didn’t mind. He moved his hand, and the robe he wore disappeared, and a light mantle appeared instead above the white, simple shirt. He tilted his head, so all the braids and the prince’s crown vanished from his hair.

- Do not waste your magic… - the wind grumbled, snatching into his hair, tangling the snow-white locks.

Shi raised his hand, covering up the Peak with turquoise flames. Expressing his opinion.

- Snooty… - Snow Bird noted, as he appeared next to him on the icy rock.

- A nice evening to you too.

- I thought I would wait until you cry your heart out, but I came anyway.

- I wish I knew why you are mocking me.

Snow Bird gave no reply, but the wind died. Shi could finally take a look around in peace. You could not see either the Endless Sea, or the Mortal Kingdom from the Peak. Only the deserted, grey, snowless mountains to the east, where darkness came from. But the thickening shade wasn’t illuminated by the crimson lights of the fires once burning forever. The darkness of the night remained desperately black. Shi closed his eyes.

- Do not say it… - he whispered and Xian Xue obeyed.



Shi returned to his room only when the Palace was covered by shades everywhere. He ordered the night shift guards not to let anybody in Mirage Hall, unless he opened the doors. It was already dawning when he fell asleep. He was awaken by dull-voiced conversations somewhen during the day, but he refused to get up. He recognised the patient and severe voice of Liu Shu, giving orders to the guards. However, he couldn’t endure for long the annoying squeaking of the High Maid, who arrived later. The woman was bickering with the servants on an absolutely not low-key volume, scaring Liu Shu, that the ceremony is spoiled, if the cannot enter at once to prepare His Majesty as they should.

The prince remembered an old memory… He saw his mother, always surrounded by clipped-haired servants, preparing for hours every time she was supposed to attend some official ceremony. And Ka Suo… He was also complaining about wasting so much time on preparing for ceremonies. Shi would’ve wasted some magic on creating a proper outfit for the celebration, then he changed his mind. It’s not worth that much magic. Any maybe he could avoid such situations in the future, if he gives in now.

He rubbed his eyes, and sat up. He pulled a flower closer from the tablet by his bed, and breathed its scent deeply. Then he raised, just as he was, in shirt and barefoot, and he walked to the snow crystal inlaid into the middle of the floor. He took a deep breath and yelled out to the guards.



Liu Shu was the first to enter. He looked up the prince raising up, something passing in his eyes, but he wasn’t too surprised after all, remembering their last conversation. Shi nodded him slightly, then he glanced straight forward. And he tried to look very strictly.

The High Maid was next to appear in Mirage hall, followed by the servants. As she saw the prince standing in the center of Mirage Hall, his hair down, without his expensive cloths, barefoot, her hypocrite look melted away from her face just like fire burns ice into nothing. She just stood there, funny voices coming out of her throat, as she couldn’t speak. Silent giggling started behind her back, and the situation was getting very sensitive. To her luck the prince had mercy and he said in a clear voice:

- Make haste.

The High Maid turned red right down to her collar decorated by gems, but she started to order the servants around aloud. Shi peered at the Counsellor and allowed himself a half smile. Liu Shi coughed in return.

- Make a bath. Get the garment. And the jewellery. Quick. - Xi Huan fussed about.

The girls looked after their task, while the High Maid loitered in embarrassment. Shi was already laughing inside. Then he got serious. At the same time they both saw Bai He appearing at the door, a basket in her arms filled with fresh flowers. She did not look at them, trying to remain invisible and to reach the table, but Shi stood in her way.

- Wait. Choose a flower.

Bai He shivered and snapped her head up. She looked into the eyes of the prince, and dipped into the basket. She picked a snow lily, but as she realised, she put it back and pulled out a cherry sprig instead. She reached to him, but the High Maid smacked at her arm right away. The flower and the full basket with it fell onto the floor. The girl retreated in embarrassment, and bowed her head at once.

- You fool. You don’t even know His Majesty deserves a snow lily? Quick, pick it up, and bring another. - she yelled and kicked the basket further away.

Shi took a deep breath. The cherry sprig rose up, the empty basked flew into the arms of the girl, the High Maid started to shiver from the icy flames covering her up from head to toe.

- Enough. - the prince whispered.

Bai He crouched down and collected all the scattered flowers in silence. Most of them broke, she sadly put them back into the basket. The High Maid didn’t dare speak, but she wasn’t able to hold back her anger. She had no courage to stay in front of the prince either, so she muttered something and disappeared towards the bath hall.

Shi didn’t move. He was standing there with the sprig in his hand, watching the girl. Bai He looked up, and her hand stood still in the air. The moments passed, but silence was broken after a few heartbeats by a bustling voice.

- Bath is ready, Your Highness. - the High Maid reported, bowing deeper than usual.

Shi didn’t move yet, first he watched the mortal girl collecting everything, taking a bow and leaving.

In his bath hall the servants lined up with towels, his robe and his underclothes in their hands, watching him innocently. And they obviously waited him to undress.

- I will be alone. - he used his most severe voice, and waived them to leave him alone. The girls and the High Maiden put down everything they had in their hands on a bench set by the wall, bowed and left.

Shi observed them walking out through the moving curtains hung between the columns around the bath. All of them looked back at him.

That is just fine, he thought. First the throne, now this… How long can he escape their expectations? He blinked at the bath, filed with lilies. He sighed resignedly, and dropped down his cloths. Water and flowers refreshed him quickly, and improved his mood a bit too. He didn’t want to get it over with at all costs and as soon as possible. Curiosity woke up inside him, so as he put on his soft, blindingly white cloths and walked back, the Counsellor noted happily the tiny smile hiding in the corner of his mouth.

The High Maid was ready holding the long, light turquoise coat decorated with thousands of gems in her hand. A detailed blue embroidery ran down from the shoulders of the coat, and Shi felt its weight already, even before raising her arms to put it on. But the robe wasn’t laid on his shoulders yet, as the crown rested on a pillow in the hands of a servant as well. The other servant approached with a comb in her hand, when the door opened again. Bai He returned with another basketful of flowers. As she entered the door, she bowed silently, as she wouldn’t want to be noticed at all. She approached the table keeping a distance from the others, and began to empty her basket without a word. The prince thought otherwise though. He wanted to annoy the High Maid on purpose. So as the servant lowered her head in front of him, raising the comb, he shook his head.

- No. Today Bai He will finish my celebration outfit.

The High Maid loudly started to protest.

- But Your Highness. This is only a mortal. She is not worthy, besides she has no idea about how to…

Shi didn’t look at the woman. He only tilted his head a bit, and she was already forced to shut up.

Bai He stepped closer, but her face looked nervous, and her hand shook as she took the comb. The prince took a seat on the high-topped chair, that Liu Shu brought for him.

Bai He took a bow too, as it was requested, but she still hesitated to touch the white flow of hair. Shi heard the girl finally sigh, and in the next moment careful fingers run along his hair. The High Maid hissed, and Shi smiled with satisfaction. He felt the scent of cherry blossom, as the girl pulled the comb along in his hair again and again. But when Bai He began to do the complicated braids, the air shook around them with the power of an awakening magic. Her previously certain fingers paused, but the Counsellor cleared his throat, so Xi Huan broke the spell, and disappeared in the bath hall with a sullen face, ordering the other servants after her.

Bai He relaxed. She was quite sure the High Maid had enough. Solely the presence of the Counsellor and of course the prince assured, that Xi Huan didn’t dare protest stronger. She couldn’t deny the Prince’s order, and she couldn’t move the girl away for a second time, after succeeding for the first time. She watched Ying Kong Shi showing favour toward the girl in front of everybody. But Bai He was sure, that she will be punished seriously for this - or for some hardly covered, fabricated reason, and also she will be likely moved away form the Palace. She wouldn’t have minded, though she would’ve missed those she spent most of her time with. This will be one of her last days. Why not enjoying each and every moment? She smiled as we was convinced, that nobody sees her, and started to work with more courageous moves. New ideas popped into her mind, and she formed the braids in such a way, that no immortals would’ve done. And she didn’t mind touching the prince’s neck sometimes.

Shi had fun. He managed at last to irritate the High Maid, and he brought some pleasant moments for the mortal girl as well. He saw her every move perfectly, as a huge mirror stood a few steps away from them, that was pulled closer because of the preparations for the ceremony. The girl almost finished with the braids, only the last steps remained, but she was to stand right in front of the prince for it. She tried markedly not to look at him, though this was impossible, as she had to arrange the locks left free. And she couldn’t do it without the crown. She looked up, Liu Shu was already standing by her with the crown in his hand. Bai He thanked him with a smile taking it over, and after checking the braids one more she placed the sparkling jewel on the prince’s head carefully.

Ying Kong Shi closed his eyes. The crown was heavier than yesterday. He waited until the girl finished with arranging his locks, then looked at her. Bai He, who approved herself one last peaceful moment before giving in to her fate, was so surprised by the searching glance of the shining blue eyes, that she froze. Shi moved first, but as he stood up, he kept on watching her. She was forced to step back. Still they were too close to each other, when the High Maid returned with the girls.

Xi Huan watched without comment, that Liu Shu places the robe on the shoulders of the prince. Bai He bowed, when the last moment passed. She didn’t wait to be ordered, she stepped aside on her own, and found something to do as far from the others as possible.

The High Maid bent her brows trying hard to hide her emotions, though she took a bow for order’s sake, and complimented the prince for looking really elegant.

- Liu Shu, come with me, I will talk to you before the ceremony begins. - Shi said, then remarked by the door, outwardly to the Counsellor, practically for everybody:

- Everybody get prepared, without delay.

As the prince and the Counsellor left Mirage Hall, Xi Huan began to scream:

- You heard the prince. Get yourself together. Don’t bring shame on me.

She looked around, but only briefly, thinking already about which dress to choose. Her anger remained still, but she decided to deal with the mortal girl later, after the celebration.

As soon as she set her legs out, the two girls started to yell after Bai He, and ran to her.

- You lucky snow bird. The prince chose you!

Bai He squelched them.

- I am done.

- Come on… How can you say that? - Yue Liang tried to cheer her up.

- Indeed. Come. You will have the most beautiful dress on the celebration. - Li Ming added.

They took the girl trying feebly to protest from two sides, and stormed towards their room.

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